New song - Hiss'story

[Romain Xavier]

Hi  Jay and thanks for your comments :)
You are correct a small break is missing, it would bring more contrast and air in the production  … But during the inspiration of recording it did not come this way ...
I was happy of the deep voices and music production specially in the chorus but I was quite afraid that the voices may be too loud or too much in the front (cause I always double the voices)… 

Normally I am hard to myself  but all in all I am quite glad of the quality production of this song (compare to my old stuff but I still want to progress tho) 

Now I look forward for new trips (maybe with less weird lyrics ;) 
 
Romain 




> On 13 Jan 2020, at 20:05, Jay Vaughan <ibisum at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav <https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav>
> 
> First thoughts:
> 
> Nice, clean production … feels very cultivated at first.
> 
> Double-tracked vocals are great.
> 
> Vocal/Music balance is great - I can discern the vocals while still getting immersed in the music.
> 
> Needs a really thrashy middle-eight, imho .. some kinda break at least .. the music is interesting, but it doesn’t seem to get its chance.
> 
> Also, I imagine I could hear a really fine, whispery pad sound in my head towards the end of the track, which I think would add to it.
> 
> 
> Generally, a great track!  I fell that its very slick and quite well polished, and the production is very nice.  Only thing I’d add is a middle-eight break, ad some pad variation in the outro.
> 
> j.
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