<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hi Jay and thanks for your comments :)<div class="">You are correct a small break is missing, it would bring more contrast and air in the production … But during the inspiration of recording it did not come this way ...</div><div class="">I was happy of the deep voices and music production specially in the chorus but I was quite afraid that the voices may be too loud or too much in the front (cause I always double the voices)… </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Normally I am hard to myself but all in all I am quite glad of the quality production of this song (compare to my old stuff but I still want to progress tho) </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Now I look forward for new trips (maybe with less weird lyrics ;) </div><div class=""> </div><div class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 13 Jan 2020, at 20:05, Jay Vaughan <<a href="mailto:ibisum@gmail.com" class="">ibisum@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8" class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class=""><div class=""><a href="https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav" class="">https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav</a><br class=""></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""><div class="">First thoughts:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Nice, clean production … feels very cultivated at first.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Double-tracked vocals are great.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Vocal/Music balance is great - I can discern the vocals while still getting immersed in the music.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Needs a really thrashy middle-eight, imho .. some kinda break at least .. the music is interesting, but it doesn’t seem to get its chance.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Also, I imagine I could hear a really fine, whispery pad sound in my head towards the end of the track, which I think would add to it.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Generally, a great track! I fell that its very slick and quite well polished, and the production is very nice. Only thing I’d add is a middle-eight break, ad some pad variation in the outro.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">j.</div></div>_______________________________________________<br class="">music-bar mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:music-bar@lists.music-bar.org" class="">music-bar@lists.music-bar.org</a><br class="">http://lists.music-bar.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/music-bar<br class=""><br class="">Listen to Music-Bar Radio! <http://www.music-bar.org/radio.html></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>