New song - Hiss'story
andrew at bml.co.uk
Mon Jan 13 21:52:56 CET 2020
I really, really like this one. The production and the vocals in
particular are great, there are hints of Bowie in there at times. I love
the spacious mix, and the way the percussion uses the stereo field. No
frequency or distortion/saturation issues at all,I think you've nailed the
Criticisms, if I have to... the fade-out is to early and too fast. I'd like
to hear at least a couple of bars of the outro before the fade, which eats
into the last chorus at the moment. There's a lovely swoopy sound at 2:09
that's really great, but is a little buried. More like that over a longer
outro might be a good recipe?
The two-note xylophone-ish sound all the way through did start to annoy me
a little on about my 3rd consecutive listen, not a big issue, but maybe try
dropping out out for the choruses so it lifts the verses?
I like Jay's idea of a middle 8, that would being it up to normal pop song
length. A good place for a guitar solo maybe, or have the xylophone-ish
sound break it's 2 note pattern for a bit?
On Sat, 11 Jan 2020 at 22:22, Romain Xavier <xtechcode at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi everyone !
> Here a song that made in the end of last year.
> I must thanks Joost for giving me small feedback before to send the song
> here, Thanks dude !
> The song has a simple structure : Intro - Versus - Chorus - Versus -
> Chorus - End
> It is not too long and it is not too short (2 min 47)
> I spent quite some time to mix and master the song all by myself, and I
> think it translates quite ok to different monitors :)
> However, I am curious to know what you think about it eg : if the voices
> are to loud, or if there are some freq (Low, Low Mid, Mid, Hi Mid, Hi
> Freq) bothering you, if it s distorted / saturated too much etc …
> Gears used :
> Logic Pro Synth : Alchemy, ES E, Sculpture, Drums
> Yamaha Ex5
> Guitar (Rocktron Chameleon)
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