New song - Hiss'story

[deeplfo]

 Nice tune.  To my ears it could do with a bit of sparkle, perhaps punchier drums, just a bit more snappy in the mix to cut through would be nice, imho.  Very nice though, you totally could do a little breakdown and build it back up to play with the length.  Nice vibe.
mohsen

    On Saturday, January 11, 2020, 02:22:41 PM PST, Romain Xavier <xtechcode at gmail.com> wrote:  
 
 Hi everyone !

Here a song that made in the end of last year.

I must thanks Joost for giving me small feedback before to send the song here,  Thanks dude !  

The song has a simple structure : Intro - Versus - Chorus - Versus - Chorus - End
It is not too long and it is not too short (2 min 47)

I spent quite some time to mix and master the song all by myself, and I think it translates quite ok to different monitors :) 
However, I am curious to know what you think about it  eg : if the voices are to loud,  or if there are some freq (Low, Low Mid, Mid, Hi Mid, Hi Freq)  bothering you, if it s distorted / saturated too much  etc  … 

Gears used : 

Logic Pro  Synth : Alchemy, ES E, Sculpture, Drums
Yamaha Ex5
Guitar (Rocktron Chameleon)
Bass 

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https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav

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Cheers !

Romain 




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