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<div dir="ltr" data-setdir="false">Nice tune. To my ears it could do with a bit of sparkle, perhaps punchier drums, just a bit more snappy in the mix to cut through would be nice, imho. Very nice though, you totally could do a little breakdown and build it back up to play with the length. Nice vibe.</div><div dir="ltr" data-setdir="false"><br></div><div dir="ltr" data-setdir="false">mohsen</div><div dir="ltr" data-setdir="false"><br></div><div><br></div>
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On Saturday, January 11, 2020, 02:22:41 PM PST, Romain Xavier <xtechcode@gmail.com> wrote:
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<div><div dir="ltr">Hi everyone !<br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Here a song that made in the end of last year.<br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">I must thanks Joost for giving me small feedback before to send the song here, Thanks dude ! <br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">The song has a simple structure : Intro - Versus - Chorus - Versus - Chorus - End<br></div><div dir="ltr">It is not too long and it is not too short (2 min 47)<br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">I spent quite some time to mix and master the song all by myself, and I think it translates quite ok to different monitors :) <br></div><div dir="ltr">However, I am curious to know what you think about it eg : if the voices are to loud, or if there are some freq (Low, Low Mid, Mid, Hi Mid, Hi Freq) bothering you, if it s distorted / saturated too much etc … <br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Gears used : <br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Logic Pro Synth : Alchemy, ES E, Sculpture, Drums<br></div><div dir="ltr">Yamaha Ex5<br></div><div dir="ltr">Guitar (Rocktron Chameleon)<br></div><div dir="ltr">Bass <br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">—— <br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><a href="https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav</a><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">——<br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Cheers !<br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Romain <br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">_______________________________________________<br></div><div dir="ltr">music-bar mailing list<br></div><div dir="ltr"><a href="mailto:music-bar@lists.music-bar.org" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">music-bar@lists.music-bar.org</a><br></div><div dir="ltr"><a href="http://lists.music-bar.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/music-bar" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">http://lists.music-bar.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/music-bar</a><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Listen to Music-Bar Radio! <<a href="http://www.music-bar.org/radio.html" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">http://www.music-bar.org/radio.html</a>></div></div>
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