Track critique invitation - Voynich - Alocrom

[Chris Strellis]

Hi Peter,

> It's definitely an improvement over the previous version. One thing,
> though: to my ears, it sounds like drum track (particularly the toms)
> is
> completely disconnected from the chords, arps and lead. It's like
> listening to two tracks at the same time.

The toms were a bit of a risk.  There are only a few tracks I know that
have such a prominent repetitive tom pattern and that's Tangerien Dream
circa 1984/5.  This is the inspiration for the track.

> Also, on my headphones, the stereo image sounds a bit narrow. Not with
> the toms, though, and perhaps that's why they sound so disconnected.

The toms have some reverb that give them their own space.  It might be
too much?

> Mind, it's a nice enough track there's just two issues that stand out
> for me.

Thanks for the feedback.

Cheers

Chris