Please crit our track!

[K9 Kai Niggemann]

Hi Andrew,

thanks alot for your in-depth analysis and suggestions. We are trying  
things out and will adjust a few things. I had a feeling the voice was  
too loud, and am glad that you found it the same.

Standing in the doorway between two rooms is a good technique, too, by  
the way...

Again, thanks!

Kai (who really can't wait to hear what punkdisco thinks of "Angel...")



On 19. Feb 09, at 00:28 , Andrew Robinson wrote:

> I'm really liking this a lot! You've got a quirky, unique, yet very
> accessible sound there. I could see this sort of thing selling very
> well!
>
> Putting my critical hat on, I think at times the vocal is a touch too
> loud, and at other times it's a little bit too quiet. I'd love to try
> the 'turn it up loud, close the door and listen from another room'
> trick to confirm my suspicions, but my girlfriend is asleep in the
> next room! Structurally, I think things could be changed about a bit
> if you wanted the track to be more commercial. The double length verse
> at the start could be halved so we get to the 'angel' hook after 24
> seconds not 56. I think the second half has much stronger lyrics than
> the first. The bridge section (2:31 to 2:56) is so very good that it
> really deserves to happen more than just once, so I'd try putting it
> in at 1:18 to get back to a normal length for a single.
>
> - Andy_R
>
> 2009/2/18 K9 Kai Niggemann <canine at waf80.de>:
>> Hi bar,
>>
>> we just finished (did we?) a new track "Angel of Berlin" and put it  
>> up
>> on our site:
>>
>> http://deindaybreak.com
>>
>> Please let me know what you think of it and give us some criticism...
>> more is on its way...
>>
>> Kai
>>
>>
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