Please crit our track!

[Andrew Robinson]

I'm really liking this a lot! You've got a quirky, unique, yet very
accessible sound there. I could see this sort of thing selling very
well!

Putting my critical hat on, I think at times the vocal is a touch too
loud, and at other times it's a little bit too quiet. I'd love to try
the 'turn it up loud, close the door and listen from another room'
trick to confirm my suspicions, but my girlfriend is asleep in the
next room! Structurally, I think things could be changed about a bit
if you wanted the track to be more commercial. The double length verse
at the start could be halved so we get to the 'angel' hook after 24
seconds not 56. I think the second half has much stronger lyrics than
the first. The bridge section (2:31 to 2:56) is so very good that it
really deserves to happen more than just once, so I'd try putting it
in at 1:18 to get back to a normal length for a single.

- Andy_R

2009/2/18 K9 Kai Niggemann <canine at waf80.de>:
> Hi bar,
>
> we just finished (did we?) a new track "Angel of Berlin" and put it up
> on our site:
>
> http://deindaybreak.com
>
> Please let me know what you think of it and give us some criticism...
> more is on its way...
>
> Kai
>
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