Another track

[Romain Xavier]

Hi ! 
Very well done ! I personally love it  :)
Listening now for the third time in a row :P
Overall it sounds very good to me (Skinny puppy + Big Black),I can see that you are developing your own style :)

As Joost said some sidechain on some tracks would maybe help.
For the  the delay on the bass sound (or is it on the kick) I would try it in mono ...
 
For the reverb on the voice you may add an eq with a High Pass and a Low Pass … 
 
Sometime I would send the guitar signal into a ping pong delay for a second or two to get this dub guitar sound going / echoing to space and fading away...

For the distorted high synth which kicks in around 3:42 I would add a phaser to add more Panning movement (it s what you did for the guitar), then I would maybe add a filter on it .. (however your Saturation + Tape delay are very nice tho ) .

Just curious how long it took you to make this track from beginning till now ? 

Thank you for sharing ! !


Romain 




> On 9 Dec 2019, at 15:44, Joost Schuttelaar <joost at joostschuttelaar.nl> wrote:
> 
>> On 23 Nov 2019, at 13:18, tom adam <tom.adam at thebigear.be> wrote:
>> 
>> https://soundcloud.com/pjmarkovic/wip-segundus
> 
> Nice track :) two things, I’d drop the delay on the bass sound (or is it on the kick)? It takes up a lot of headroom in the right channel. Also on the vocals, the distorted reverb has an extremely bright/long tail. I’d shorten this. Perhaps add some sidechain on the synths from the drums for additional oomph :)
> 
> Cheers,
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