New track

[tom adam]

Hi Andrew

I have no new advice to give you on the mixing part of the song.

It's not my kind of music, so I have no reference, but I'm missing a 
'reason' for the track. It's not 'pulling me in', if you get what I 
mean. I would try to add something that catches the listeners attention. 
(Like you did with the cowbell, but something more powerful) A voice is 
the first thing that comes to mind...

A second thing I was thinking in the beginning of the track was to 
remove one of these lead sound and replace it with a guitar riff. 
(somehow I was thinking of a riff like Daft Punks 'loose yourself to 
dance' king of thing) I think it would give an extra 'natural' feel to 
the song.

Good luck with the competition!

Cheers,

ToAd


On 25/09/2017 14:29, Andrew Tarpinian wrote:
> Hey guys, haven’t posted a new track in a while. I signed up for the 
> deadmau5 Masterclass a while back just for fun. They have a contest 
> where you submit a track and 1st place is 10k and a chance for a 
> release on Mau5trap. This track was tough for me from a mix/master 
> perspective because there are so many layers and especially since I’m 
> still learning. I’m using a combo of outboard and plugs. Curious to 
> see what you guys think of this version.
>
> https://soundcloud.com/modulargrey/breathe-v03
>
> Thanks,
>
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