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<p>Hi Andrew</p>
<p>I have no new advice to give you on the mixing part of the song.</p>
<p>It's not my kind of music, so I have no reference, but I'm
missing a 'reason' for the track. It's not 'pulling me in', if you
get what I mean. I would try to add something that catches the
listeners attention. (Like you did with the cowbell, but something
more powerful) A voice is the first thing that comes to mind...</p>
<p>A second thing I was thinking in the beginning of the track was
to remove one of these lead sound and replace it with a guitar
riff. (somehow I was thinking of a riff like Daft Punks 'loose
yourself to dance' king of thing) I think it would give an extra
'natural' feel to the song.<br>
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<p>Good luck with the competition!</p>
<p>Cheers,</p>
<p>ToAd<br>
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Hey guys, haven’t posted a new track in a while. I signed up for
the deadmau5 Masterclass a while back just for fun. They have a
contest where you submit a track and 1st place is 10k and a chance
for a release on Mau5trap. This track was tough for me from a
mix/master perspective because there are so many layers and
especially since I’m still learning. I’m using a combo of outboard
and plugs. Curious to see what you guys think of this version.
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