Your advice please.

[Nigel Kersten]

(opinion disclaimer :))

I think you took way too long to get to the bits around 5:00, and it felt
disjointed on the way there.

I like the shiny happy vibe at that point as well as the darker synthwave
influence earlier on, but not together, and both feel like they could be
developed out into fuller arrangements, but I'm not convinced they should
be roommates.

It might be that there's actually two songs in here you were working on at
once.
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