Romain Songs
Rom MUSIC BAR
xtechcode at gmail.com
Thu Dec 4 22:17:17 CET 2014
HI Joost :)
Indeed Ozric Tentacles came into my top10 favorite bands if it s not top 5 since I saw them :)
I will adapt the first track 'drum in function of what you said … (thanks for the advises, it s exactly what I was waiting for :)
The 2nd track needs some guitar solo or something at the beginning...
The 3rd track is the one most “finished” of the four songs … and I m glad if you like it :)
I m bit stuck for the 4th one, singing some stuff or not, is the question ;)
All in all, thanks again :)
Romain
On 04 Dec 2014, at 13:23, Joost Schuttelaar <joost at joostschuttelaar.nl> wrote:
> On 01 Dec 2014, at 20:10, Rom MUSIC BAR <xtechcode at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> I wanted to share 3 or 4 songs that I am trying to record recently … Most of them are from a different style imo …
>>
>> https://soundcloud.com/alternativatorium/sets/awaked-dream
>
> Like the new style! Very relaxed… reminds me of two certain bands, you know which ones ;)
>
> Some constructive criticism: the first track sounds a bit like it’s playing ‘far away’. Whilst the drums are quite close. Perhaps tune down the reverb a bit. The guitar melody line is great.
>
> The second track has a great groove in the second part. Third track is just great all over :) Fourth is a bit repetitive but no problem when just casually listening :)
>
> Good work!
>
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> Joost Schuttelaar
> The Hague, NL
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