Track critique invitation - Voynich - Alocrom

[Marc Nostromo [M-.-n]]

Agreed it sounds a lot better thant the previous version. Congratulation for
the ehancement !

Personally the issue peter has with the toms doesn't bother me. On the other
hand, now that all the instruments are better shaped, I'm kind of missing a
bass pattern. But it's just a question of style. I might understand you
don't want any.

Good work man !
/M

2011/9/21 Peter Korsten <peter at severity-one.com>

> Op 21-9-2011 11:58, Chris Strellis schreef:
>
>
>  OK this should be better. I added a few more embellishments, notably
>> ride cymbal in the middle 16 "beautiful" section and crash cymbal in a
>> transition place and the end.
>>
>> http://www.voynich.co.uk/mp3/**Voynich_Alocrom_V1.00_**mastered.mp3<http://www.voynich.co.uk/mp3/Voynich_Alocrom_V1.00_mastered.mp3>
>>
>
> It's definitely an improvement over the previous version. One thing,
> though: to my ears, it sounds like drum track (particularly the toms) is
> completely disconnected from the chords, arps and lead. It's like listening
> to two tracks at the same time.
>
> Also, on my headphones, the stereo image sounds a bit narrow. Not with the
> toms, though, and perhaps that's why they sound so disconnected.
>
> Mind, it's a nice enough track there's just two issues that stand out for
> me.
>
> - Peter
>
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