Track critique invitation - Voynich - Alocrom

[Marc Nostromo [M-.-n]]

My feeling is that there's subbass 'beating' in the intro and they are a bit
disturbing at least in my headphones.

If it was me, I'd compress/eq the hell out of it to get it more in your face
and bring out all the instruments. I tend to over do it but this sounds very
'tape demo', unless that was the intention of course :)

There is that one key (the voic-ey one) that is definetly more in front than
all the rest (including arps & percs) and I don't think it's right.

Hope that's helpful.

2011/9/20 Gert van Santen <g.vansanten at chello.nl>

> Op 20-9-2011 13:31, Chris Strellis schreef:
>
>  Gents,
>>
>> I've been invited (well I forced myself upon them to be honest!) to
>> submit another track for the follow up compilation album of this:
>>
>> http://www.groove.nl/cd/3/**33644.html<http://www.groove.nl/cd/3/33644.html>
>>
>> This time the 20 or so artists create one track that adheres to one of
>> four decades from the 70s to now of classic electronic music. The decade
>> I've chosen is 80s - no surprises there!
>>
>> Here's an early mix:
>>
>> http://www.voynich.co.uk/mp3/**Voynich_Alocrom_V0.9_mastered.**mp3<http://www.voynich.co.uk/mp3/Voynich_Alocrom_V0.9_mastered.mp3>
>>
>> http://goo.gl/Zs0w7 Short link.
>>
>
> Hi CHrist,
>
> I only had a quick listen, because I'm working on my own stuff atm.
>
> My thoughts:
>
> 1. I like the themes and sounds and the overall idea.
> 2. I don't like the intro. It makes the track feel boring and slow.
> 3. Perhaps you might think about losing some of those loooong notes, and
> trade them in for short release stuff.
> 4. The overall sound is good, although some sounds could use a bit of
> (extra) EQ to give them more space in the mix and/or prevent too much
> pressure from them.
>
> Cool that you're on the album again :-)
>
>
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