Review needed

[Tony Hardie-Bick]

Can't fault it. Love the "great circle method" reference - whether the recipient 
will have enough background in geography/navigation to be slightly chilled by 
this level of detail, is another matter ;)

On 17/08/11 18:09, Mikael Hansson wrote:
> I'm writing to Ryanair about our delay, I'd be thankful if someone better at
> english could take a look at my text:
>
> ------------
>
> We hereby request compensation in accordance with Regulation (EC) 261/2004 for
> the delay of our flight FR 1938 from Venice Marco Polo Int (VCE) to Stockholm
> Skavsta (NYO).
>
> Flight information:
>
> Flight number: FR 1938
>
> Booking reference: *******
>
> Airport of departure: Venice Marco Polo Int (VCE)
>
> Airport of arrival: Stockholm Skavsta (NYO)
>
> Date of flight: 10/August/2011
>
> Scheduled time of departure: 20:25
>
> Scheduled time of arrival: 22:55
>
> Actual time of departure: 23:45
>
> Actual time of arrival: 02:00
>
> Distance between VCE and NYO, measured by the great circle route method: 1510 km
>
> Passenger details:
>
> Mikael Hansson
>
> Marina Hansson
>
> Since the delay was more than 3 hours and the distance of the flight was more
> than 1500 km, we request compensation of € 400 each, totalling € 800.
>
> -------------
>
>
> Anything I should change?
>
> /Micke
>
>
>
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