A new idea - Lyrics

[Matt Picone]

you're shining, through your shell  

>> I have a problem with shell. One doesn't shine through a shell.
>>     
>
> What about 'you are radiating through your shell'? It would also enhance 
> the word 'ra-di-ating' by the 'syllable-staccato' and make it more 
> consistent with the other lines.
>   
Same problem-- Radiating is about the sun, not a turtle or a clam.

Shining through the clouds, shining in the dark, etc.

-m@