A mars a day

[Gorman, Declan]

Hey Marc,
  Thanks for listening and welcome back. :0)

  You are not wrong as I think that my arrangement skills are lacking too.  Personally I think I write good grooves but when it comes to arranging them in any imaginative way I haven't got a clue. It's very formulaic and as you say linear.  I need to work on this side of things some more.

  Your comments are appreciated and agin thanks for listening.

Declan.

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From: shelter-bounces at lists.music-bar.org [mailto:shelter-bounces at lists.music-bar.org] On Behalf Of M-.-n
Sent: 28 April 2008 10:31
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Subject: Re: A mars a day


Hey Declan,

It sounds very nice and it's got a very nice ambiance to it but it's too 
linear/loop-ish for my taste. The build-up feels too much like you add a 
new pattern every bar and each element misses variations. By the half of 
the track I know I'm not going to get any 'surprise' and it's a bit of a 
shame.

Don't get me wrong, I like it, but I think you could get it much better.

Hope that helps
Marc

Gorman, Declan a ?crit :
>
> Here's another track that I am working on. I like it but let me know 
> what you think.
>
> http://www.degomusic.net/mp3/temp/dego_Untitled.mp3
>
> Cheers!
>
>
> Declan.