My RPM prospects...

[Joost Schuttelaar]

Excuse my pretentiousness :)

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Joost Schuttelaar
The Hague, NL

On 14 feb. 2013, at 23:55, Joost Schuttelaar <joost at joostschuttelaar.nl> wrote:

> The first 20 seconds can be stretched. Have some patience. The piano itself, with some details, really played, slowly adding strings, could be a nice intro. The fill-up around 1:10 is great. The part leading up to it is a bit generic. The part afterwards as well, but nice. Milk those contrasts. At 2:00, I've heard *a lot*. But at the same time, I've heard nothing. All the elements are there. Building up and down. But you just need to take it easy... at 3:00 I feel a bit of saturation, like you are milking yourself. At 3:30, the nice soft synths, they're great. But they just appear. Tell your story. Be patient :)
> 
> Second play :) yes, 10 secs of the piano. Come on! Give me a minute of your piano-style and gently bring me to the point... check out what Rammstein did: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5FoDLjoxBM. So simple. Take it easy. Take it easy. Take it easy.
> 
> All in all I like it :) it has everything it needs. It just needs your time and your momentum, nothing else :)
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> Joost Schuttelaar
> The Hague, NL
> 
> On 14 feb. 2013, at 23:42, Mikael Hansson <forums at deadmengods.com> wrote:
> 
>> Thanks guys!
>> 
>> No 2 evolved a bit during the evening.
>> 
>> http://deadmengods.com/ideas/dmg_recession_idea2.mp3
>> 
>> Not properly mixed as I need some fresher ears :)
>> 
>> Structure ok, more variation?
>> 
>> /Micke
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On 14 feb 2013, at 23:07, Joost Schuttelaar <joost at joostschuttelaar.nl> wrote:
>> 
>>> On 14 feb. 2013, at 22:32, deeplfo <deeplfo at yahoo.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>>> Popped out after lunch :-)
>>>> http://deadmengods.com/ideas/dmg_recession_idea.mp3
>>> 
>>> I like this one a lot.
>>> 
>>> Really great feel. Just make it a tad more explicit perhaps. But I love it :)
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