Fractales12 New song : " For a change "
Romain / rXg
xtechcode at gmail.com
Mon Mar 19 16:00:41 CET 2012
Thank you Tony for this long Email,it s appreciated and motivating . :)
About the guitar at the beginning yes there is a chorus from my rocktron
( I love it as bands who used those sounds )
I don t really understand what you meant "by the way, which one is Pink?"
except if it s about Pink Floyd syd Barrett and roger Waters ...
Anyhow I did what barians advised me : cut some low freq on the bass around
250Hz ( also before it wasn t completely tied), and I tried to boost and
clean the vocals ...
For the second part I hope it doesn t sound so flat anymore ( but it still
challenging; it s for this reason i should record my guitar with the
Re-Amp technic) ...
Bellow is a new version if you or other barians are interested :)
http://www.fractales12.com/title/for%20a%20change%201a.mp3
Thnak you again for listening :)
Cheers
On Sat, Mar 17, 2012 at 3:15 PM, Tony Hardie-Bick <tony at entity.net> wrote:
> On 15/03/12 10:40, Romain / rXg wrote:
>
>> Thank you tony,
>> just let me know for the music ... (It s not zappa style i must admit)
>>
>
> Well I have no preference for style, only good music :)
>
> Strange to say... the lyrics in this track are so good - intense, and
> beginning to develop a unique voice (in the sense of language) - but you
> can hardly hear them in the mix. So much work, and most who hear this track
> will not have any idea what is going on underneath.
>
> If you're serious about writing lyrics, then the music is either equal or
> less important. Given the quality of your lyrics, I think you need to see
> music as a way of putting your words across, rather than a way of creating
> a vibe that hopefully some people will recognise and then start listening
> (the very opposite of the entertainment industry idea... "by the way, which
> one is Pink?"). This will make your work more original and subversive, and
> less like the bands your friends wish you were in ;) They will like your
> music less if you step outside the social identity they (and you) have
> created for it.
>
> The music itself - brilliantly put together, although... chorus on guitar?
> I know there are loads of bands that do this, but, just my opinion, it
> really is a sound that got used up very quickly a long time ago. Also, bass
> drum in the opening minute or two - it's a heartbeat, so, understand what
> metaphor you're using, and mix it as such - ie, more bassy, more reverb,
> less like a cardboard box.
>
> The dynamics of the piece are strangely flat in the loud section, and
> although you could see this as a technical issue (compression ratio), I'd
> say forget technology, and ask yourself about the narrative structure of
> the art, rather than the sonic structure of the music. Always see the big
> picture ;)
>
> But... brilliant. You're in good company in recording inspired lyrics that
> nobody ever gets to hear because the music's getting in the way :)
>
> Tony (HB)
>
> :)
>>
>> On Wed, Mar 14, 2012 at 7:57 PM, Tony Hardie-Bick <tony at entity.net
>> <mailto:tony at entity.net>> wrote:
>>
>> Liking the lyrics... will just let these jump around my head for a few
>> days
>> before I listen to the music :)
>>
>> Tony (HB)
>>
>>
>> On 13/03/12 19:48, Romain / rXg wrote:
>>
>> Hello Barians ...
>> There is the song i wanted to do ( lyrically) for the topic
>> "change"
>> rpm 2012
>> but this is the second version, the first version( not recorded)
>> is with
>> acoustic guitar plus voice only and it s a completely different
>> wipe ...
>>
>> I used bass, guitars ( rocktron), Kaossilator,
>> ultrabeat(logic),Pro 53
>> (logic),
>> and addictive drums, voice was recorded via a Rode nt1 through
>> tubepre
>> presonus
>> ... :)
>>
>>
>> http://soundcloud.com/__**fractales12/for-a-change<http://soundcloud.com/__fractales12/for-a-change>
>>
>> <http://soundcloud.com/**fractales12/for-a-change<http://soundcloud.com/fractales12/for-a-change>
>> >
>>
>>
>> * For a change*
>>
>>
>> So here I am , There I go
>> In the space waves as you know,
>> You are so heavy, I am so light,
>> Also crazy when you denied:
>>
>> Everything I done still has no range,
>> Everything I done still has no range ...
>>
>> So here I was, there I went,
>> Through your spaces for you to obtain,
>> My love so insane, zigzaging so strange ...
>> Why don't you make me smile for a change ?
>>
>> Everything I done still has no range,
>> Everything I done still has no range ...
>>
>> Change is life, change is death,
>> Change is changing my own faith,
>> Change your love, change your pain
>> Change everything but keep the rain ...
>> There we go, there we swim,
>> We don't know what's happening,
>> Change my kind, change my mind,
>> Change this chaos, sometimes it's fine...
>> I just forgot myself ....
>>
>> For a change ...
>> I just forgot myself ...
>>
>> For a change ...
>> Change is old, change is new,
>> Start to stop, stop to start,
>> What is true in the end ?
>> What was the beginning again ?
>> Change the yin, change the yang,
>> Change the nothing, they turn in round,
>> Let's run, let's fly,
>> Let's swim, let's die ...
>> I just forgot myself ...
>>
>> For a change ...
>> I just forgot myself ...
>> For a change ...
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