Track critique invitation - Voynich - Alocrom

[Chris Strellis]

Guys,

I've further poked, prodded and tweaked this track thanks to your
suggestions.

You can see from the version number that things have changed since
V1.00! Nothing too drastic has changed from the original. There's a
dramatic pause on the arp when the first twang comes in. I did add a Tom
fill just before the Toms start in earnest. I added a bass line too as,
correctly spotted, there was a missing weight and element to the track.
I redid the electric piano part too so it has more balls though.
Plus numerous effects tweaks, volume balancing, EQ tweaks throughout.
You know the usual process ;)

Please click below just to satisfy your curiosity.

http://www.voynich.co.uk/mp3/Voynich_Alocrom_V1.30_mastered.mp3

http://goo.gl/mLUeO

This is lightly mastered but I will be sending off an unmastered version
so it may ultimately sound slightly different.

Thanks for listening and if you do have any horrible comments to make -
keep'em to yourself - it's too late :-P

But seriously, thanks very much for all you inputs.  It's much
appreciated as I learnt a lot making this track.

Cheers

Chris