Track critique invitation - Voynich - Alocrom

[Gert van Santen]

Op 20-9-2011 13:31, Chris Strellis schreef:
> Gents,
>
> I've been invited (well I forced myself upon them to be honest!) to
> submit another track for the follow up compilation album of this:
>
> http://www.groove.nl/cd/3/33644.html
>
> This time the 20 or so artists create one track that adheres to one of
> four decades from the 70s to now of classic electronic music. The decade
> I've chosen is 80s - no surprises there!
>
> Here's an early mix:
>
> http://www.voynich.co.uk/mp3/Voynich_Alocrom_V0.9_mastered.mp3
>
> http://goo.gl/Zs0w7 Short link.

Hi CHrist,

I only had a quick listen, because I'm working on my own stuff atm.

My thoughts:

1. I like the themes and sounds and the overall idea.
2. I don't like the intro. It makes the track feel boring and slow.
3. Perhaps you might think about losing some of those loooong 
notes, and trade them in for short release stuff.
4. The overall sound is good, although some sounds could use a 
bit of (extra) EQ to give them more space in the mix and/or 
prevent too much pressure from them.

Cool that you're on the album again :-)


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