New track - Saffron

[Mikael Hansson]

Hey guys, need your expert advices

<http://deadmengods.com/ideas/dmg_saffron_idea.mp3>

I'm not quite sure if I'm pleased with some things here:

The bass changing from a few notes/bar -> 8th notes -> 16th notes
Initially it was only 16th notes.

Is the chorus to weak compared to the other parts?

I considering making the break the end of the song, what do you think? 
If so, should I make another break or just do it without a break?

Other suggestions are very welcome!

I haven't spent any time on the drums yet so they are just a 1-bar loop 
going round at the moment.

/Micke