A new idea - Lyrics

[Jay Vaughan]

> you're shining, through your shell
>>> I have a problem with shell. One doesn't shine through a shell.
>> What about 'you are radiating through your shell'? It would also  
>> enhance
>> the word 'ra-di-ating' by the 'syllable-staccato' and make it more
>> consistent with the other lines.
> Same problem-- Radiating is about the sun, not a turtle or a clam.
> Shining through the clouds, shining in the dark, etc.
>


you can shine through things.  shine through the pane of glass, shine  
through the murk, shine through ones behind, and so on.


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Jay Vaughan