what do people think of this...?

[The Dong]

Jay Vaughan wrote:
> all extremely, very, violently, delicate.  Scientifically,  
> religiously, humanly, whatever we have to say and do about it, there  
> is little we can actually really do, for ourselves, so far, than to  
> just enjoy every second of it.

I think, my life, might be more enjoyable, if I didn't have to, read, 
text, with so many erroneous, and grammatically abhorrent, commas 
scattered, hither and thither, like little nazi-sperms, denying smooth 
and spontaneous, diction along with, a holocaust of, sentence stuttering..

;)