Freedom 2008

[Gorman, Declan]

Thanks Marc, I appreciate the comments.

I am working on getting away from the 'patternic' feel to my songs, it's
a bad habit I have got myself into over the years.

Regards,

Declan.

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From: music-bar-bounces at lists.music-bar.org
[mailto:music-bar-bounces at lists.music-bar.org] On Behalf Of M-.-n
Sent: 15 May 2008 12:49
To: Music-bar
Subject: Re: Freedom 2008

Hey Declan,

Again, really nice production. Everything seems in the right place (at 
least with my headphones) and well balanced.

Personally I find some sound to be a little too much 'stock' for my 
liking, for example the synth that you are playing the filter/volume of 
is lacking a bit of personality in my eyes. The song feels a little 
'patternic' and I would add more transition/evolution in the various 
parts. Maybe even shortening it a tad bit. Ho, and the first snare hits 
(before kicking in full rythm) are in a really strange place. I was not 
expecting it there and it felt awkward timing-wise.

But All in all it's very nice...

My cents :)
Marc.