<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="overflow-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;">Quick raw feedback! I find the high pitched synth sound a bit annoying - it’s simply too frequent, dominant and predictable. The linndrum-style kick is very dry, but also weak. It’s probably not part of the aesthetic you’re going for, but I’d turn that into a bit more of an oomphie techno kick, include a rumble/gate reverb (low pass 200hz) and also sidechain compress with the main bass & synth sound. Perhaps I’d also introduce some air by adding some long high passed reverb, don’t know on which tracks though.<div><br></div><div>Good luck :)<br><div><br><div>
-- <br><br>Joost Schuttelaar<br>The Hague, NL
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I need to send it to them end of next week...</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks!</div><br><div>
<div>Tom Adam</div><div>tom.adam@thebigear.be</div><div>www.thebigear.be</div><div><br></div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline">
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