<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class=""><div class=""><a href="https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav" class="">https://www.fractales12.com/_title/test/Hiss'story_Sat_11_1_2020.wav</a><br class=""></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""><div class="">First thoughts:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Nice, clean production … feels very cultivated at first.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Double-tracked vocals are great.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Vocal/Music balance is great - I can discern the vocals while still getting immersed in the music.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Needs a really thrashy middle-eight, imho .. some kinda break at least .. the music is interesting, but it doesn’t seem to get its chance.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Also, I imagine I could hear a really fine, whispery pad sound in my head towards the end of the track, which I think would add to it.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Generally, a great track! I fell that its very slick and quite well polished, and the production is very nice. Only thing I’d add is a middle-eight break, ad some pad variation in the outro.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">j.</div></body></html>