<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Imo of course,</div><div><br></div><div>I think it's a bit too drawn out, I would take what you have here and condense it to become the first half of the song, then do a variation on the bass/Mel for the second part. </div><div><br></div><div>The bass Mel notes in the 4th bar of the main loop bug bug me a bit, I think it could be a touch more interesting before going back around. </div><div><br></div><div>This may be more opinion than you were asking for...<br><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><br>On May 28, 2015, at 12:38 AM, Marc Sims <<a href="mailto:avarlinqui@hotmail.com">avarlinqui@hotmail.com</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
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<div dir="ltr"> I've got this tune that, I think is pretty much there, but I've got a feeling its missing something just cant think of it, its not been automated or fully mastered yet. Any suggestions?<br> <br><a href="https://soundcloud.com/bollocks-to-this/126-the-3rd" target="_blank"><font color="#0072c6">https://soundcloud.com/bollocks-to-this/126-the-3rd</font></a><br> </div>
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