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Thanks Andy. I will re-visit the track and address the points that
you mentioned. I was already feeling the same and just hearing it
from somebody else just re-enforces the fact that it needs to be
changed.<br>
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Declan.<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 02/03/2014 14:10, Andrew Robinson
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<div dir="ltr">Really liking this one, there's actually a lot of
subtle stuff going on in there, and the big 'hands in the air'
moment at 4:18 is wonderful. I do see Gert's point though. On
the production side, it's pretty flawless. There is an 'acid'
line that comes in at 0:47, and I'd love to hear the filter open
up on this one at some points.. but that's probably because I'm
still in love with the old fashioned Hardfloor acid tracks.
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<div>Arrangement-wise, I'd be inclined to cut down a bit on the
slow build up section, possibly buy cutting out 2:03 to 3:13
and I'd add a couple of minutes more around 5:30 ish when
everything's happening, and add variations there. Again it
might be personal taste, but bringing the 'top line' in at
4:48 seems too late to me.
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<div class="gmail_quote">On 2 March 2014 07:30, Declan Gorman <span
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Gert :-)</div>
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23:34</span><br>
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New dego track on SoundCloud</span><br>
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Declan Gorman schreef op 1-3-2014 21:19:<br>
> Hey all,<br>
> Just finished this track today and wanted to
share it with you<br>
> guys. Let me know what you think. :-)<br>
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> dego - ReGroove <<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://soundcloud.com/dego/regroove"
target="_blank">https://soundcloud.com/dego/regroove</a>><br>
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> Enjoy!<br>
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Nice groove, but to be honest - not much happening...<br>
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-- <br>
Gert<br>
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gert van santen<br>
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