<html><body><div style="color:#000; background-color:#fff; font-family:arial, helvetica, sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><div><span>Got a 404 on the link.</span></div><div><br><span></span></div><div><span>Mohsen</span></div><div><br></div> <div style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> <div style="font-family: times new roman, new york, times, serif; font-size: 12pt;"> <div dir="ltr"> <font size="2" face="Arial"> <hr size="1"> <b><span style="font-weight:bold;">From:</span></b> Joost Schuttelaar <joost@joostschuttelaar.nl><br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">To:</span></b> Music-bar <music-bar@lists.music-bar.org> <br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Sent:</span></b> Monday, February 27, 2012 5:22 PM<br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Subject:</span></b> RPM: My submission (or WIP…)<br> </font> </div> <br>
Ugh, again tired ears, the structure sucks. Some nice elements, but there is no flow, feels very cut 'n pastey. Some sloppiness too... Ah well... improve between tracks and not within :)<br><br>http://rpm.music-bar.org/Eukaryote%20-%20Particle%206.mp3<br><br>-- <br><br>Joost Schuttelaar<br>The Hague, NL<br><br>_______________________________________________<br>music-bar mailing list<br><a ymailto="mailto:music-bar@lists.music-bar.org" href="mailto:music-bar@lists.music-bar.org">music-bar@lists.music-bar.org</a><br>http://lists.music-bar.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/music-bar<br><br><br> </div> </div> </div></body></html>