<html><body><div style="color:#000; background-color:#fff; font-family:arial, helvetica, sans-serif;font-size:10pt">btw, Paul, great sounding track. My only 2c comments would be structural related. I see two places, one at around-ish 0:51, where there is a riser coming in, and another around 1:23-ish. I would make perhaps make the transitions more dramatic :-) with stripping stuff down and then rebuilding it. The one at 0:51 with the riser is almost there....<br><br>cheers,<br>mohsen<br><br></div></body></html>