Your advice please.

[Rom MUSIC BAR]

Hi Marc,
As mentioned by other i think the song is (imo) too long, the 4 parts sound more than one song  ...

First part : I was waiting some Acid' cutoff / resonance variation on the synth 303 ( guitar)  sound. ;)
Second part : the Bass pattern makes me think of daft punk in someway ; it s really nice
Third part : Nice Dancing club music 
Fourth part : Nice evolution from the third part 



I don’t if it help but thank you for sharing :)

 
Romain 




On 28 May 2015, at 06:38, Marc Sims <avarlinqui at hotmail.com> wrote:

>  I've got this tune that, I think is pretty much there, but I've got a feeling its missing something just cant think of it, its not been automated or fully mastered yet.  Any suggestions?
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