A new idea - stage 2

[Gert van Santen]

Mikael Hansson schreef:
> Gert van Santen wrote:
>> First: I like it a lot.
>> I know it's just a sketch, but I would think about these things:
>> 1. I would make the intro shorter and without the (cool) metallic 
>> sounds - they are not coming back anywhere and sound a bit out of 
>> place.
>> 2. Sing less insecure (happens in some places, not everywhere).
>> 3. Take care of false notes in the vocals.
>> 4. Make some dip in the synth EQ to make place for the vocals.
>>
>> Good job; looking forward to the next version :-)
> 
> Thanks for listening and helping out!

You're welcome.

> Do you mean the metallic sounds that's just in the beginning or the ones 
> that's in both the beginning and end?

I don't mean the Sample&Hold sounds that are both in the 
beginning and at the end, but the melody like sounds that are 
only in the beginning. It's nothing big, though, just a feeling.

> About the vocals I feel that the second bridge is the best take so far, 
> but I hope to improve it a lot to the final version.

I like your voice a lot for this style. I don't know if you sing 
often, but I'm quite sure you could get better fast :-)

Cheers,
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