Mon Aug 25 13:26:01 CEST 2008
Mikael Hansson wrote:
> Thanks for listening and pointing out some things to improve. I've tried
> to work toward your recommendations. Let me know if it's better/worse :)
I see you took down the original one, so I don't have the reference and
I'm listening on headphones now - a bit of salt is advised...
It definitely sounds better now. You didn't automate the filter, though,
right? I'd play with that. Like at 0:30, I'd bring the pad up a bit more
and filter the bass, then at 1:05 open up the filter a bit. At 1:14 I'd
try without the syncopated bass - gives more space for future buildup,
giving more power around 1:47 when you return to the original theme. I
love that pad, btw, and would emphasize it even more.
At 2:55 you could then keep it as it is, so you'd keep the theme from
1:14 but with more energy.
When you bring in the new theme at 3:59, I'd bring that synth into the
foreground instead of the square "pings" - it's a new element that
deserves more attention. You'll be back as it is at 4:33.
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