A mars a day

[M-.-n]

Hey Declan,

It sounds very nice and it's got a very nice ambiance to it but it's too 
linear/loop-ish for my taste. The build-up feels too much like you add a 
new pattern every bar and each element misses variations. By the half of 
the track I know I'm not going to get any 'surprise' and it's a bit of a 
shame.

Don't get me wrong, I like it, but I think you could get it much better.

Hope that helps
Marc

Gorman, Declan a ?crit :
>
> Here?s another track that I am working on. I like it but let me know 
> what you think.
>
> http://www.degomusic.net/mp3/temp/dego_Untitled.mp3
>
> Cheers!
>
>
> Declan.
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